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sheba57
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since 1999-06-27
Posts 64
vincennes, in usa

0 posted 2000-05-14 01:58 AM


life

blood, coursing through tubes;
corpuscles spinning as arteries
throb and veins pulse.
this is life .....
molecular, dynamic - yet passe?

white ghosts, squirming through tubes;
fighting, racing toward the quest.
only one will win out and breach
the defenses of the mass.
this too is life .....
molecular, dynamic - not so passe.

silvery strands sighing through tubes;
passing in and out of the clusters.
shallow, silent, finally still.
this was life .....
molecular, dynamic - never passe.

~celtic rose - 2000~


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Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-05-15 12:04 PM


very interesting, I had to reread a few, this is great.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-05-15 10:13 PM


~Sheba,...this one surely got my mind thinking.  Very interesting read,...thank you for sharing.
sheba57
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since 1999-06-27
Posts 64
vincennes, in usa
3 posted 2000-05-21 11:30 PM


thanks joel and spitfire,

i don't really know where this one came from.  it is definitely a first of this type for me - totally a new style.

sheba

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