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The only solution (*not my true feelings)
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The only solution (*not my true feelings) |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
I had to do it it was killing me inside I thought I would feel better but now I know it was better to hide You ran out the door and into the street you didnt come back so i had to speak "It was a stupid mistake!" I screamed into the night but I never heard a sound nor saw any light I didnt know what to do without you I had died inside my only solution: Suicide I drove to your house I prepared the rope I tied it around my neck as I dropped the note: "As you read this please remember me Im the one who loved you Im the one hanging in the tree Your heart belonged to me and to you I was untrue I never ment to hurt... this is the best that I can do... I wanted to show you how I felt inside My only solution: Suicide "Falling in love is just that - falling. Sometimes you merely trip and stub your toe. Sometimes you fall to your hands and knees. But sometimes you smack your head against the pavement and die." |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
This is sad. It's no way to apologize and it's not a solution, for anything. You go to the person(or send a note) and you say," I made a mistake and I am very sorry." The person either accepts your apology or they don't. Don't mess up a lot of lives, just because you made a mistake.This would be the last mistake and one you couldn't apologize for. God Bless. MagnoliaBlue |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
I agree with MagnoliaBlue, That is no way at all...it is a cowards way out and cause so very, oh so very much more harm hurt and pain. If they can't forgive you for what was done, then it wasn't meant to be...fate has a way of dealing us what we think a fatal blow, but really it is what must be to preserve us from future pain... |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
thanks guys but once again let me remind u that these arent my true feelings...i just wrote the poem because i wanted to...i would never think of killing myself for mistakes that i have done...but anyways thanks again! "Falling in love is just that - falling. Sometimes you merely trip and stub your toe. Sometimes you fall to your hands and knees. But sometimes you smack your head against the pavement and die." |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I felt this poem very much. I found a man in a tree once in the hills he made a great show of his knots and abilities in tying his rope, but he forgot to allow for springing action from the tree lim, it took a long time. very graphic your poem and my memories. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
thanks! Im so sorry u had to find someone in a tree...a horrible way to die to say the least! thanks again for replying... ashley |
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