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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392
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Layer by layer Peice by peice Vein by vein Drip by drip I peel away the parts of me to stand skinless exposed bleeding freely for you before you so that you may peer into the true depths of me. There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Holy moly,...what a RAW expression. Well done here....if only everyone could see the "whole" in all of us. [This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 05-20-2000).] |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Spit you kill me with your expressions. haha Anyway I've always said that I'm an open book, I might want to reconsider this option. Very open. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
I thank you both for your words and am glad to see that I accomplished what I set out for with this poem...absolute and raw expression. Many thank yous... There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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