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bluebrdy65
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since 2000-05-16
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Gladys,

0 posted 2000-05-17 10:15 PM



Why
My body aches
I dont know why
My mind has gone
I dont know why

I feel gloomy and sad
and it makes me mad

Because I dont know why!

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Lonelypoet
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since 2000-05-10
Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA
1 posted 2000-05-18 01:23 PM


Good poem, I feel the same only it's not the body that aches it's the heart.
Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-05-19 03:18 AM


And the soul.
great short and to the point poem.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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