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Cyndol Claycamp
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since 2000-05-17
Posts 12


0 posted 2000-05-18 02:04 PM


Alone #1

The loneliness sweeps over me.
It is not that I am not with anyone.
But that within the depths with in my very soul I am separated
Never to find one that understands
or one that can make me happy for
even I, the one who writes this, am not me.
I am but half the Island I should be.
Far from the other half and the other lands( other people)
I am separate from them and myself.
Making my solitude deep and lonely.


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Cyndey
Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84
Arkansas
1 posted 2000-05-18 02:32 PM


Cyndol...
such feelings of lonliness is within us all, but i've never heard them expressed in such a graceful manner, a truely inspiring poem!
Cyndey

Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-05-19 03:27 AM


Yes very inspiring, I so feel this poem, it hurts.

Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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