Destroyed Palace...Destroyed Hope~Epic continues

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Destroyed Palace...Destroyed Hope~Epic continues

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-05-17 11:11 AM

He woke up on a bed of stones
Thorn pricked scars upon his lips
The last whisps of the flower seeds
Float by, carried off by the wind
He, powerful ruler dying in the ruins of his kingdom
No will to pick up the pieces
Or carry himself to his chamber doors
Where not a soul but the vacant breeze will welcome
him in.....

Will he carry on? Or wil he let his kingdom, his palace in the clouds, be destroyed forever? Stay tuned for what happens.

Thanks,
Joy

Gather ye rosebuds while ye may,
Old time is still a-flying,
And this same flower that smiles today
To-morrow will be dying.

-Robert Herrick

Lonelypoet
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA

1 posted 2000-05-17 05:35 PM

Great Poem Joy, I will be waiting for the next one.

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

2 posted 2000-05-17 05:49 PM

Thanks Lonely. New to Passions? Here's a big welcome from me! WELCOME!

Joy

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2000-05-17 06:10 PM

"He woke up on a bed of stones."
"Thorn pricked scars upon his lips."
This is how I feel while I await Lena's dear heart to soften for me. How long will I wait? Stay tuned. James

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

4 posted 2000-05-18 12:09 PM

WOnderful work Joy awaiting part 3

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

5 posted 2000-05-19 02:50 AM

I'm betting on the king. he will fight. then again that's me.
Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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