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Walter Poe
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 2000-05-11 09:47 AM



I saw you
silent shimmering
like the ghost
flitting through my dreams

Silver shimmering
Light twinkling
Over velvet wrinkles
in flowing hastes

Watch the lights
Skies lit bright
with your smile
show me the love

every room
Every open space
is you
you are all

see me stand
in the dark corner
staring out
into your light

Am i small
omnipotent one
Are you all
my love

How i yearn
to be near
to touch
to feel

  Hello darkness, my old friend,
I've come to talk with you again,
Because a vision softly creeping,
Left its seeds while I was sleeping,
And the vision that was planted in my brain
Still remains
Within the sound of silence.

© Copyright 2000 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-05-11 10:40 AM


I saw you
silent shimmering
like the ghost
flitting through my dreams
Silver shimmering
Light twinkling
Over velvet wrinkles
in flowing hastes

Watch the lights
Skies lit bright
with your smile
show me the love
--------------

walter this is SO perfect!!
I love when you write like this.
I do believe my poet friend is smitten. *smile*
inspired for sure!!
take care, jm

 It's amazing
How you make your face just like a wall
How you take your heart and turn it off
How I turn my head and you lose it all ...
And it's unnerving
How one move just puts me by myself
There you go just trusting someone else
Now I know I put us both through hell ...
I'm not sayin
That there was nothing wrong
I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me
And I'm not sayin
We ever had the right to hold on
I just didn't wanna let you get away from me.
~MB20~Leave



Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-05-12 08:57 AM


Take care my friend the pettel stool we place our loves on tumbles.
Shine just as bright as anyother light.
And yes this is a great poem.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
3 posted 2000-05-12 10:16 AM


WP, this is nice poetry!

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-05-12 06:58 PM


So beautiful and sad Walter, great work as always  

 At last I have heard the song of enlightenment.... In your heart you can hear it now, if you listen....
It is the song your spirit has been singing since the moment of your birth. All lasting victories are won in the heart....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


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