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Strosek
Member
since 2000-04-08
Posts 61
Fourways, Gauteng, South Africa

0 posted 2000-05-10 07:16 PM


Well this is my first poem submitted to dark passions though I have submitted a few others to the corner pub.

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I am darkness, My soul tormented
Evil rules my thoughts
Darkness encircles my life
Demons taunt my ears.

I am darkness, My soul tormented
My life ruled with no light
Happiness eludes me
Thoughts hidden by thick smog

I am darkness, My soul tormented
Hands guided by dark desire
Life a blemish on death
Death, Ruler of my soul

© Copyright 2000 Victor Tunmer - All Rights Reserved
SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-05-10 09:27 PM


~You've come to the right room....hehe.  This is the first of your works I've read and I'll surely be looking for more.  Great expression.
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-05-10 11:59 PM


Well hell Spit took the words right out of my mouth. haha

But she didn't say is Welcome to Dark Passions.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-05-11 12:04 PM


Welcome to the dark forum!!  You certainly fit in here hon!!    Come back soon eh?  

 At last I have heard the song of enlightenment.... In your heart you can hear it now, if you listen....
It is the song your spirit has been singing since the moment of your birth. All lasting victories are won in the heart....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Strosek
Member
since 2000-04-08
Posts 61
Fourways, Gauteng, South Africa
4 posted 2000-05-11 04:10 AM


Spit, thanks- I'm kinda a split person, with a very dark and light side to me, it's just nice to have an outlet for the darker feelings on my soul.

Joel - Thanks for the welcome

Isis - Thanx, and I'll deffinatly make a return.

[This message has been edited by Strosek (edited 05-11-2000).]

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