Dark Poetry #1 |
I am darkness |
Strosek Member
since 2000-04-08
Posts 61Fourways, Gauteng, South Africa |
Well this is my first poem submitted to dark passions though I have submitted a few others to the corner pub. ____________________________________ I am darkness, My soul tormented Evil rules my thoughts Darkness encircles my life Demons taunt my ears. I am darkness, My soul tormented My life ruled with no light Happiness eludes me Thoughts hidden by thick smog I am darkness, My soul tormented Hands guided by dark desire Life a blemish on death Death, Ruler of my soul |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~You've come to the right room....hehe. This is the first of your works I've read and I'll surely be looking for more. Great expression. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Well hell Spit took the words right out of my mouth. haha But she didn't say is Welcome to Dark Passions. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome to the dark forum!! You certainly fit in here hon!! Come back soon eh? At last I have heard the song of enlightenment.... In your heart you can hear it now, if you listen.... It is the song your spirit has been singing since the moment of your birth. All lasting victories are won in the heart.... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Strosek Member
since 2000-04-08
Posts 61Fourways, Gauteng, South Africa |
Spit, thanks- I'm kinda a split person, with a very dark and light side to me, it's just nice to have an outlet for the darker feelings on my soul. Joel - Thanks for the welcome Isis - Thanx, and I'll deffinatly make a return. [This message has been edited by Strosek (edited 05-11-2000).] |
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