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Dark Poetry #1

Just you

NamelessOne
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 197
Biloxi MS

0 posted 2000-05-08 05:39 PM

Hopeless condition
nonexistent inhibition
on my mind you sprawl
can`t think of anything else
not at all
just you

thoughts of you enter my day
needing to run
needing to play
the sun on your face
the wind in your hair
drifting into
just you

mush too much
frivalous such
hard to contain
but the fact remains
to me there`s
just you

[This message has been edited by NamelessOne (edited 05-08-2000).]

Broken
Member

since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

1 posted 2000-05-08 06:05 PM

This was really beautyful, and I can relate to it well. I to have someone who's special, one of a kind she is. Great poem.
Take care

Yours truly
~Broken~< !signature-->

"Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering fearing,
Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before;
But the silence was unbroken, and the stillness gave no token"
~Edgar Allan Poe (1809-1849) "The Raven"

[This message has been edited by Broken (edited 05-08-2000).]

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396