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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods 
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TIME Dear God Allow me to turn to nothing For I wasn't meant to be If I could change anything I'd change about everything Fighting battles in my mind Doesn't get me anywhere It doesn't make it better And all the self-inflicted wounds Seem to hurt more than before The scars are beginning to show I can feel their fingers point My God I'm scared to death You know I could really use some help I'm to weak to help myself I fear this time I won't make it through You're all so strong, a vicious crowd Laughing as you savour the sweetness of my agony Why do you make it so hard? Why not just kill me and get it done? Oh well... I knew the storm was getting closer And I'm tired of living a lie I'm sick of this life I hate myself and I want to die So take your knife Tear a hole Release my captured soul Darkness, my home Time has caught up It's time to leave It's time to go I'm sorry [This message has been edited by Broken (edited 05-07-2000).] |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
This is very sad and very deep...i hope that you can find some way to overcome these feelings. You've written the emotions out in an extroidinary way,and i really love this poem!! swamp And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Broken~ I hope you are ok, this is such a sad piece. -SEA |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Whoa,...that sounded like it HAD to come out. Hope it made you feel atleast a little bit better. Hang in there....great conveyance of emotions to text. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
HHHHHOOOOOOWWWWWWWLLLLLLLL I can only howl to this, is very sad. And I agree with spit this had to come out. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
It's been a while hasn't it my friend? Well I'm sorry but I have needed some time away from the forums and from a few other things aswell. Maybe I'll start visiting more...I don't know yet....but I just wanted to tell you that this was a truly excellent poem and a very good expression of your feelings....they sound so much like my own. As always, it has been a pleasure reading your words. Yours truly, Angel "A man's fate is a man's fate and life is but an illusion." -Shogun ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Strosek Member
since 2000-04-08
Posts 61Fourways, Gauteng, South Africa |
wow, great poem, really expresses your feelings, I've been there man, not a pleasent place, but life has a way of showing another side of situations, Hope things get better. |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
Sw.~ Thank you for your kind words, I'll keep an eye out for your poems.  Sea~ Yeah I'm okay, somewhat damaged, but okay. Thanks for asking by the way.  Spitfire~ You're right, it had to come out. And yes, getting replies to my poems always makes me feel a bit better. Take care Joel~ HHHHHOOOOOOOWWWWWWLLLL!! Strosek~ Thanks for your concern, and I do feel better now. Thank you D.E~ Yes it has been a while my friend, and I to have been away for a while, this is my second post in about 3 weeks I belive. But I've been missing you anyway, and I'm glad you're back. Take care, my friend in the dark. ~Broken~ "Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering fearing, Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before; But the silence was unbroken, and the stillness gave no token" ~Edgar Allan Poe (1809-1849) "The Raven" |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
Sw.~ Thank you for your kind words, I'll keep an eye out for your poems. Sea~ Yeah I'm okay, somewhat damaged, but okay. Thanks for asking by the way. Spitfire~ You're right, it had to come out. And yes, getting replies to my poems always makes me feel a bit better. Take care Joel~ HHHHHOOOOOOOWWWWWWLLLL!! Strosek~ Thanks for your concern, and I do feel better now. Thank you D.E~ Yes it has been a while my friend, and I to have been away for a while, this is my second post in about 3 weeks I belive. But I've been missing you anyway, and I'm glad you're back. Take care, my friend in the dark. ~Broken~  "Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering fearing, Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before; But the silence was unbroken, and the stillness gave no token" ~Edgar Allan Poe (1809-1849) "The Raven" |
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topsyturveychick Member
since 2003-01-19
Posts 57Bris,QLD,Aus |
I'm reading all of ur poems..U have a great way of writting..and even though I myself arn't going through depression...I want to be a pychologist when I'm older and it intregues me to read all of ur poems...I think they're great. I asked God how much he loved me... |
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