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Perhaps (ode to the lonely)
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Perhaps (ode to the lonely) |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Perhaps tommorow Will bring light To this lonely Death respite Perhaps the rain Will take away The pain i fell Every long day Perhaps my heart Will skip a beat When next a damsel I am to meet Perhaps my love Will return All these emotions I now show Perhaps an angel Perhaps heavens door Pehaps its gone Perhaps ill stay Perhaps tommorrow Is just to far away Did you write the Book of Love And do you have faith in God above If the Bible tells you so Do you believe in rock 'n roll Can music save your mortal soul And can you teach me how to dance real slow |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Nice poem. Good use of rhyme, perhaps. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
A lovely ode this is, Walter. "Perhaps" is word that is hard to grasp at times...it's like a longing for hope from the shadows of doubt. A hope for hope, itself, if you would. Wonderful poem. Michael |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Perhaps the touchstone of hope... Great job Walter  May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Perhaps my heart Will skip a beat When next a damsel I am to meet Perhaps my love Will return All these emotions I now show Walter I love this one... always look for the hope in perhaps...its what keeps us all going...jm When you see through love's illusions, there lies the danger... And your perfect lover just looks like a perfect fool So you go running off in search of a perfect stranger While the loneliness seems to spring from your life Like a fountain from a pool. Jackson Browne |
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faith Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 89 |
Nice poem...the ending is very touching! faith |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
We never know what tomorrow may bring |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
Wonderfully said and perhaps tomorrow will bring the beginning of something new |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A nice style. For sure all of those things will happen...perhaps I know not when. James |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I think I am liking your poems as much as your stories! Liked this a lot ! |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
There is no perhaps about it, I really like this poem. Perhaps you will write another one, perchance you do I will be looking for it! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Walter~ this is great! -SEA |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Hi... I know you wrote this a long time ago, but in my search for odes in this poetry forum, I came across this beautiful piece of yours. I really love it, and it touches the heart. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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