Dark Poetry #1 |
One Single Bud |
Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest |
One single bud, soon to be birthed in the sun. Glory awaits the beholder, patience is the key! The fragrance experienced, knees that go weak. Beauty breathless, A peaceful abandon of rest. Waiting for this blooms show, Anticipation grows! Red as crimson when it comes, Bursting with the sun! Love is patient like the rose, And it's beauty surely grows. "Life is what happens while you are busy making other plans." John Lennon |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
this is beautiful!!! i have such little faith in love... i needed to read that slow does it grow. soon it will show its tender face. thank you!! kynder The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Yes kid Patience is the key. I reside within this now, for my flower to grow. I love this kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
perfectly beautiful???beautifully perfect??? Not sure which way that goes....perfectly beautiful.....yeah, I guess that's it..but it is...the concept, the image you painted in my mind,...the theory about patience...well, damn, ...the whole thing |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Illusion~ Such beauty in this, I enjoyed reading this very much and I'm reminded of all my standard roses I'm planting down my drive way Thanks for sharing this Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Your poem of wisdom is beauty in itself! It's short and to the point, sometimes less really is more. Well done! Yes, patience is the key when it comes to love and life. "love is patient like the rose and it's beauty surely grows" now that is a perfect and beautiful line that you have penned. This is the only poem that I have read by you and I am very impressed! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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