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NamelessOne
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 197
Biloxi MS

0 posted 2000-05-03 10:38 AM

i can see the sun slanting off the water
as i make the last block to the beach
it`s a day cast from a perfect mold
the sky deep blue with a single cloud
the breeze a welcome friend
the kind of day you wish you could slow down
so that it won`t as quickly end
these are easy to take for granted
and the feelings that they bring
life rushing past
not waiting for the ones
who don`t take the time
to watch that cloud
and feel that breeze
so just remember that life is now
not tomorrow or next week
and to love life is to love the details

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-05-03 10:48 AM

~Perfection....it's so true that we so easily overlook the little things that can make such a huge impact. Take the time to notice...that's a great message to send out. Thanks for the post...I enjoyed it

kynder
Senior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

2 posted 2000-05-04 01:13 AM

once again, you speak my hearts symphony. the water is something i will never tire of. thank you for placing its beauty in words i can read.

kynder

The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

3 posted 2000-05-04 06:16 PM

The details of life.

I suppose it takes a poet, a artist, a creator, to see those details so many miss. Liked your poem a lot.

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

4 posted 2000-05-05 01:33 AM

To love the little things , details, we all miss, faltering in step.
This hits home real quick for me, I've been trying to pay close attention to details lately. And yes a single cloud in the sky.
Joel. thanks.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

5 posted 2000-05-05 07:35 AM

Oh what a wonderful poem, such truth in your words. Life sure is worth living

Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

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