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isiskate81
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since 2000-04-14
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0 posted 2000-05-03 10:21 PM


Little one with little hands and feet,
you bring me such joy nothing can compete,
Little one with blue eyes and brown hair,
you love with out caring,
Little one with a big heart,
I love you and always will.

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SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-05-03 10:49 PM



Awww....this was such a warming thing to read..thank you for posting,..I needed the smile this put on my face.

isiskate81
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since 2000-04-14
Posts 31

2 posted 2000-05-04 12:09 PM


I wrote this for my 2 y/o goddaughter.  I babysit her almost everyday and i love her so much where very close and no matter how upset I am when she smiles I'm not really upset anymore I dont have many things I can trust enought to love but she is one that i will.
Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
3 posted 2000-05-04 06:06 PM


A lovely poem indeed, full of tenderness.  
Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
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Angels Camp
4 posted 2000-05-05 01:25 AM


Some light in the dark. I like it.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
5 posted 2000-05-05 07:43 AM


This was soo beautiful. Short but oh so sweet
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
6 posted 2000-05-05 08:58 AM


Sometimes less is more, your poem is very sweet and sentimental!     You have a good heart!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

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