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amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

0 posted 2000-05-03 06:13 PM



Some say life is dark
Some say nothing is permanant is life
Some say we always should struggle in life
Some say to love a person truly is a crime
Some say to achieve what you want is bad
Some say I can't love anyone
Some say I'm just empty hearted
Some say I can't see through other's pain
Some say I'm very tough
Some say I'm just a dreamer
Some say I'm just infatuated and not in love
Some say I'm a flirt
Some say I'm just a dirt
Some say I....

But please,
"I know what I am"

But I'll never question them
as I needn't convince anyone
to be the one I like to be
I wish and desire to be

Some will keep on saying
But I will never keep on listening

Sincerely
A_L


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SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-05-03 06:57 PM


~Oh my gosh.....perfect.  Good for you....really.  Say what you say and know what you are,...and don't keep on listening.
*I liked this poem lots

kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
2 posted 2000-05-04 01:24 AM


congrats to you for this strength filled work here.  i love the way you show that no matter what you are, it's not enuff for some.  so they say.   loving this one.


kynder

  The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson

Munda
Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
3 posted 2000-05-04 06:40 PM


To know what you are may be the greatest achievement in life. Good poem !
Evilkat88
Junior Member
since 2000-05-01
Posts 37

4 posted 2000-05-04 07:26 PM


It took me awhile to figure out who I am. Good for you be who you are no matter whaT. And don't let anyone tell you diffrent.
                Kat

Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
5 posted 2000-05-05 01:44 AM


I am that I am.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
6 posted 2000-05-05 07:27 AM


Great response to what some poeple may say, always be yourself and who cares what others think as long as you know who you are and what you've done  
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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