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Broken
Member

since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

0 posted 2000-05-03 05:03 PM

WISH

Another sigh slips into the void
Like an empty breeze through and out
A wish for somthing else
A wish for something better

It's dark outside like on the inside
A bitter-sweet taste of remorse
Still the hatred and agony thunder in my head

But the night is still young
Seems to me like it'll last forever
And ever and ever then I awake
Transformed and dim I look me in the mirror
Scream out loud within;
"I hate you! I hate you!"
"I wish you were dead!"
But as all wishes I've wished before
It fades and disappeares with the morning mist

If only I could vanish the same way
If only I could take a brake
I wish I could go away today
I wish...

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

1 posted 2000-05-03 09:03 PM

Broken,
I know how this feels. Sometimes I wish I would melt away, just fade away from myself. Don't give up on your life yet though. If you can express yourself and write a poem like this one, you definetley have something to contribute to this big ol' world! Okay? Smiles (a hundred million smiles) go out to you!

Joy

Evilkat88
Junior Member

since 2000-05-01

Posts 37

2 posted 2000-05-03 11:24 PM

Broken
I so know what you are feeling, but what dosen't kill you only makes you stronger.
kat

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

3 posted 2000-05-04 02:22 AM

Your friends are right kid, and I also don't want you to go away.
your feelings here are very heartfelt.
good work kid.
Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2000-05-05 12:48 PM

Broken....Sounds like you have been through a lot. I hope you do not go away either, but decide to stay. I must admit I have felt the same way a time or two myself. Great writing!!

Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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