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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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~Secrets~ secrets in the sand still warm from the days sunshine cradle my thoughts soak up my tears secret place here in the sand tiny ocean swallows me protecting me from the fight washing the pain salting the wounds one last time seasoning me with the knowledge to escape,...the night the life I found myself enveloped in secrets in the sand chasing chill chasing you resting at the crest of a gentle wave curling up the shore to my toes bringing peace,...bringing strength to bitter thoughts bringing me to better places to a safe haven to a freedom to a dream. |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
the healing power that flows from nature put into words ,great stuff Spitfire thanks for sharing |
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isiskate81 Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 31 |
This was a great post. I feel the same way often. Great work. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
excellent work here. you and i are in on the same beach my friend. isn't it great when the water doesn't scare you anymore!!! kynder The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Mmmm....yes it does. There's still a pull there but when I experience the forward motion of it....it feels wonderful. It feels amazing to have made it there,...like a release from chains that weighed me down. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
This is great kid. To reach a place as now for you. Take care. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
SF, this poem has such a nice flow....and ending....feels like inner strength taking hold. This is the best one of yours that I have read so far....good writing~~~~ dh A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Evilkat88 Junior Member
since 2000-05-01
Posts 37 |
I LOVED IT! It had a wonderfull flow and everything. Keep writeing this was freakin awsome. love kat |
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