Reversing Rolls or a (Bobbit Cut)

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Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

0 posted 2000-05-04 09:34 AM

I’m trying to expand my poetry by reversing rolls.
I must admit it might be a bit ?? physical, but don’t’ you wish this would happen?
Then again this might be one of the greatest ?? fears in a man. hahaha
Ladies you tell me.
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I’ll teach you a lesson you’ll never forget.
The horrible pain you left me with you will regret.
I want to kick you in the groin as hard as I can
Like the old game they use to play called
kick the can.
Just the thought of your private parts rolling down the street
with a big damn truck coming out grinding them to meat.
I hold a glint of hope there’s justice in this world.
That at some where or some time you will pay
for what you’ve done to this girl.
Cutting through the racking sobs of pain
a wild laugh escapes late at night.
all alone hugging my pillow tight.
Thinking of all the things I want to do to you
with another laugh I kick with a pointed shoe.
I wish they would just lock you up and throw away the key
I’d live out my life very haply.
Knowing your behind bars, I’d dance in the street.
And your knowing now what I feel as I try to sleep.
Did you think me a whimsical notation
something you could pen to a chick?
You wrote upon bathroom walls with nothing more than
your Bic
.....pin.
Knowing now what I didn’t see then
you had no true love within.
I should have pulled a Bobbit!! knowing I’d been had,
It would have joined your private parts on the road
and that isn’t bad.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-05-04 11:24 AM

~Can I have your permission to use this??????
heehee....excellent my friend...how'd you know what went through my head??? The sick and twisted thoughts of violence I wish to carry out on a few bad seeds in my life. LOL...I love this...great role reversal...

G. A. Webb
Member

since 2000-01-21

Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA

2 posted 2000-05-04 03:56 PM

OUCH! Good thing that you're not a woman...lol.

I liked this alot. Just remember one thing, women can be just as cruel and hurtfull as men. If not more so because their love doesn't last. At least that's been my expireance. Well done.

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't

Evilkat88
Junior Member

since 2000-05-01

Posts 37

3 posted 2000-05-04 07:39 PM

Very well put I have wanted to do that to a cuple of my ex's. You captured being a chick very well.
Blessed Be
kat

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