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jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

0 posted 2000-05-02 07:31 PM



Lost Memories


I couldn't remember
the birthdays.
the anniversaries,
the holidays,
or special events.
I couldn't remember
the days,
so long ago,
when first we met,
courted,
and married.
I forgot the parties,
the trips,
the vacations,
the good,
the bad,
the in-between.
I forgot all the days
of just sitting together,
looking,
talking,
touching,
of being just you and I.
But now you're gone,
and all I have left
are the things I forgot.
The memories
I'm desperately trying to remember.

W. James Beard, Jr.


© Copyright 2000 Wesley James Beard, Jr. - All Rights Reserved
SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-05-02 07:43 PM


~WooHoo.....this is great.  Not that you feel like that but just how true it is....how you've captured that.  We most often oversee the simple things....and get annoyed at times with things that we'd miss if we no longer had.  I truly enjoyed this piece...It actually makes me think of a friend I lost to a terrible accident (sadly) but, I would always tell him how certain mannerisms and habits that he had drove me nuts and now, today I miss those things....miss everything annoying he ever did.  I take it this is about losing someone in a different way, but here.....I just let you in on what this poem brought out of me.
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-05-02 07:46 PM


It is the simple things is'nt it.
We forget.

I still hear my kids calling me.
Thanks .
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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