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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
In the dark.. held to the flame.. knowing that power.. laughter via insane.. half alive, yet half something yet untamed fear of me, slowing you.. fear of I searing my pain Light belies me noctourne desires.. Darkness...much to complacent But I am.. and who are you? and the dagger flashes forth... Hand upon hand.. steel in flesh.. Heart in the void.. Once I tought innocense the blame.. but now I know... Why the moth draws near the flame... Circles of sanity.. Collar of guilt.. Crest of failure.. Cascades of lost ones.. Crescent of lies.. A dark wind rising... Snuffing of what was left inside.... Then...the Dawn... ~Fin~ Edward A. Beerman |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
Hey,i don't know if i'm just weird or not,but i think this is an AMAZING poem....i really love it!!I especialy like :Cascades of lost ones..& Crescent of lies.. those are two REALLY wonderful lines....i love this,i wish my poetry was this good....but ya always want what ya can't have isn't it the truth??¿ swamp And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Hand upon hand.. steel in flesh.. Heart in the void.. I've had this steel in the flesh, it does drive home a point , so to speak. and Yes I like this poem also. very aggressive. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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