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What am I doing? |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest 
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I sit here in disparagment The writing on the wall has been this way Some time has passed and I still remain I ask myself what am I doing? All of the pain and the failure goes nowhere Even though I try to make it hide I look for brighter days I ask myself what am I doing? The tide has went out and come back in I have seen a chance to ride the wave I tried to swim but I sank instead I ask myself what am I doing? The cares of life took control The ones I tried to control The demons I tried to kill I ask myself what am I doing? I look back and see desolation There is nothing to reclaim Only the future to try I ask myself what am I doing? So on and on I must go A driving force called life that hopes That is all that breathes now I ask myself what am I doing? To go on and live with a vengence Go to the outer limits this time Don't look back for nothing Now I know what I am doing?????? [This message has been edited by Illusion (edited 05-01-2000).] |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I had ask myself the same question many times. And I see you left it on a good note, now you know what your doing!!! this is a great poem, kid. you have been gone, and we did miss you. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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