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Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2000-04-29 11:57 PM


I sit here wondering why
You continue telling me lies
I'll be home by eight
Will not be that late

Just going to check things out
I really do have a doubt
Shouldn't take three plus hours
Last shred of faith begins to sour

I wish that just one time
You would spend a dime
Pick up the phone and say
I will be later than I thought today

Guess it doesn't matter much
Never feel the your gentle touch
Upon my cheek
After the next two weeks

We will both have our own place
Put forth a new face
Try to repair my heart
Find all the missing parts

Pass this awful test
Know it is for the best
Deep down I already knew
The lines that you drew




 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-04-30 01:20 AM


If only we could just put on a new face.
As for the poem it's a great expression.
God kid I hope things turn out ok for you.
if you want to E me anytime.
joel@goldrush.com
I've got an ear, it's long.
My heart to you.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-04-30 09:53 AM


~Hey there...LW.  I could just feel this poem pour out of you...great job expressing yourself.  Be strong
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 2000-04-30 11:30 AM


Uh, can certainly relate to this one.   Nothing worse than "knowing" and just not wanting to see...  *sigh*

michael

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
4 posted 2000-04-30 10:50 PM


Joel,
I wish.....where do I order that face??  Thank you, just writing what I feel as usual.  I hope it turns out too.  Thanks for the E address...will do.  You will need a long ear...

SF....yes it did indeed.  i will do my best to be strong.  Thanks.

Michael....sorry you relate.  It is a tough road.  Never wanted to see, but had to.  *sigh*



 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

AVANTI
Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
5 posted 2000-05-01 08:00 AM


lone wolf...what can i say...
i'm wondering myself too
and just like you deep down even i already knew...
great poem...


 If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

Tess
Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288
Australia
6 posted 2000-05-01 08:31 PM


Sometimes I feel the lies are the worse part.  Do they think we are silly enough to keep believing them, do they realize how they destroy our trust not only of them but of others in the future? And yes, it's hard to finally admit that it was lies, and admit to ourselves the truth, when in believing lies, we have been lying to ourselves too.
Take care...  

 "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time
that you've never had it before."
~author unknown~



Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
7 posted 2000-05-01 09:39 PM


AVANTI...So sorry to hear that you have been in a similar situation.  Not fun at all.  I guess we all know deep down, but it is hard to accept and admit it.  Thank you and take care!!  

Tess...Truer words were never written, my friend.  The lies are the worst...it just ticks me off to no end when I think about it.  Yes, trust will be very difficult in the future.  I am done lying to myself, just not worth it anymore.  
You take care too,
Lone Wolf


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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