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Scarlet Lady
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 242
Midwest

0 posted 2000-05-01 09:34 PM




The great divide has nothing on this
Gulfs of space too far to bridge now

We grew apart slowly
And one day we tried to reach other

Then we lost sight
And we tried, in desperation we searched

The distance was too far
Yielding  no vehicle
Nothing to bring us together any longer

We drifted even further with  fear

The more we tried to return
The further we got

No way back now

And we painfully realized
Too far
Too long gone
Too  many miles
NO  way back

The map is one of hidden treasure?
Only few will find

© Copyright 2000 Lynne - All Rights Reserved
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-05-01 10:06 PM


Oh God  Illusion how close to home you hit on me.
I tried for years to rebuild my marrage, with our hope. She had gotten to bitter.
too many miles and to mush distance.
this is also a great poem it goes to the bone. and so sad.
My heart to you kid.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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