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Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas

0 posted 2000-05-01 10:37 AM


I stand in the rain
Feeling so sad
Feeling so unloved
Am I really that bad?
I stand in the rain
Wanting to be hugged
Wanting to be noticed
For my own hole I have dug
I stand in the rain
Seeing my hopes and dreams
Yet seeing no one standing with me
I am really alone, so it seems




 I do not love you for being perfect.....
I love you for being perfect for me!!



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Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-05-01 02:17 PM


Again this hole we have put ourselves into.
you must climb out.
this poem makes me feel so much for you kid.

Joel.< !signature-->

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.


[This message has been edited by Joel the wolf (edited 05-01-2000).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2000-05-01 05:13 PM


I loved this poem...we all find ourselves standing alone in the rain at different times in our lives...no you are not that bad...you just need a little time to regain your confidence and your hope.   James
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2000-05-02 10:00 AM


Nice!  Short and to the point.  I particularly wish I had thought  of the lines

...wanting to be hugged,
   wanting to be noticed,
   for my own hole have I dug.

Boy!  I think we can all, at one time or another, relate to that! And I think we all pray that we don't relate to it again.....

j.

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