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Between Roses! |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Some where between roses! I fell in love with you. Some where between the thorns you said I love you to. Is our life over or has it just begun. Can we keep this love or let it fade away like the setting sun! Can we keep it strong never weaken with time. I need, want, and love you please say you’ll be mine. Some where between raindrops! I gave away my heart! Some where between the thorns you said we’d never part. Some where between worlds! that of yours and mine. We can find a future and a lasting love that will bind. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Joel, this is beautiful. The poem and the presentation itself is perfect! This is now my favourite poem by you!  Take care, Melissa Honeybee I wonder why you posted this poem in the dark passions forum, because it is anything but dark. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Joel...you have so much love to give. I truly hope she realizes this. Your writings reach my heart...I like the way you posted this one...and I also enjoyed the "between roses, between thorns, between raindrops, between worlds"... great concept. *Hang in there. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Somewhere between a few poems ago and this one, someone is a true romantic! If this doesn't do it nothing will...it is so beautiful, it's like...it's like well, it's like a single rose, one that hasn't opened yet, doesn't matter what color, they should all be red by the way....Joel, it's wonderful, and it's so heartfelt. Melted me I know.... Kathleen indy31_99@yahoo.com |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Joel, this is beautiful. Lovely sentiment, especially with the added effect. michael |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
very sentimental and emotional piece... well written If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Joel~ I love all your poems and I hate to single out one as my favourite but this is surely the most precious thing I have read tonight and my last read before catching some Zzzz's Pleasant dreams about your sweet white dove Luv Tracie Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
I'm afraid I agree. This one surely does not belong in the dark poems!! What beautiful thoughts and feelings you have expressed here "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time that you've never had it before." ~author unknown~ |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
This was beautiful Joel , I hope you truly find that love that will bind wishing you all the happiness between now and forever Mystical being which makes ink flow Surround me in your incandescent glow Fill my brain with thoughts and rhyme As I try to capture but a moment in time ~Shan~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Joel this is very romantic..James |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Very Wonderful Joel, beyond words for me. The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Most romantic ,very nice indeed .Good work Joel |
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BlueEyez666 New Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 9 |
That was a very good poem. Awesome job Joel! ~Jenny~ |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Melissa, I'm glad it is, thank you. Spit, I was going to put between life and death but this was better, haha thanks Rose, (cookie) thank you, I give white Dove roses almost every day, I take her at least one. If I can. Michael, yea I liked the way it came out with the colors. thanks. Avanti, thanks from the heart. Tracie, all my dreams of white dove are sweet. thanks. Tess, untill white dove and I are together, maybe my poems don't belong here, but I do. so it's a package deal. Starr, our love will bind, now and forever, thanks. James, short and sweet thanks. dhuron, beyound words, that's a lot. thanks. Nameless, romantic, maybe but from the heart. thanks. Little Blue, awsome back at ya. haha. and I love your work also kid. thank you one and all. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
Dear friend Joel This is the most beautiful poem of yours I've read thus far. Keep it up. One day she'll realise and put her fear aside. HUGS to you my friend. Sylvia |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Is it just me or as my poems get darker yours become lighter Maybe you are my lighter side my alter ego Thanksfor all the replys sorry i havent had much time for replying recently or i would have Hello darkness, my old friend, I've come to talk with you again, Because a vision softly creeping, Left its seeds while I was sleeping, And the vision that was planted in my brain Still remains Within the sound of silence. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Sylvia, I'm banking a lot on this love of mine, I do believe we are to be together. And I know it's just her fears of old baggage and lost relationships, her heart had been broken several times, She just had married the wrong people. They hadn't seen the true power of her heart, They hadn't seen the light within her, nor the potential love she has for another. I have and yes she will land upon my brow. in time. And my friend Poe. We all have the dark and light within us, And if there was to be a alter ego I couldn't think of a better one than you. Thank you for responding, I know it's hard to get to all we post, I wake up looking like hell, hahaha. But it's worth it, with all the hearts pouring out in this forum. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Joel~ ahhhh......so romantic!! I loved this! Excellent, should melt her heart. -SEA |
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