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His Wedding Day |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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My heart said to me, My Mum won't mind, And me Father won't curse you, For your lack of signs. Then he stepped away from me, And this he did say, 'It will not be long love, Till our wedding day!' He stepped away from me, And he moved on down the lane, And fondly I watched him, Try to ease suffering and pain. And when he went away homewards, Escorted by the evening star, And the birds flew home to rest, I watched him fade to afar. As he faded from sight, He turned back to me, And flashed a loving smile, His eyes smiled too, so sweetly. Now people were saying, That the two never wed, He was filled with sorrow, Took his life, that he was dead. And that was the last, That I saw my dear friend, I had not realised, That he'd met his end. I dreamed of him the other night, That my true love came in, So softly he entered, His steps made no din. He came right beside me And this he did say, 'It will not be long love, Till Our Wedding Day!' He confused me I admit, For I wasn't the one, But I was pleased to see him again, And so sorry his world had come undone.. ANOTHER ADAPTION OF AN OLD CELTIC TRADITIONAL SONG A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This is very touching, Isis. So sweet, but yet so sad to meet such an end. I love the part about the dream. Those we love never die as long as their memory remains. Great poem!!  Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Wow Isis,..the story this poem holds is incredibly heart wrenching. I love all the poems that you post,...and the creative way that you express yourself. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Wow Isis,..the story this poem holds is incredibly heart wrenching. I love all the poems that you post,...and the creative way that you express yourself. OOOPppppsss...sorry:0 [This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 05-08-2000).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Lone Wolf and Spitfire Do you get it though? He was a ghost all along and it took me/her a while to realise that?????A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
No worries about the double up A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Isis~ WOW!! this is incredible! I love the way you write! -SEA |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Sea! Wish I felt as confident about my writing as you do!! A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
Isis i know this song well,and i love your twist on it!! I think this is really a cool idea. So interesting to see what you've made of it!! swamp And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I get it Isis. . . this is wonderful. . . I love the spiritual aspect of it. . .love appears in many places. . . often when you least expect it. . .and when you need it the most. . . Wonderful poem my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
neato!!!  ~H |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Swamp Faierie you like Loreena then? Thanks also Sven and X Angel At last I have heard the song of enlightenment.... In your heart you can hear it now, if you listen.... It is the song your spirit has been singing since the moment of your birth. All lasting victories are won in the heart.... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
A spector in the day. and a very nice poem, I do love the way you put thoughts to pen, kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Great moving piece Isis, well done. People come and go throughout our lives, but some will always remain in our hearts even though they may not be there physically any more. Thank you for sharing this one.  G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Joel and Mr Webb!! I'd love to know why people say they love my style all the time, it ain't that wonderous or different!! At last I have heard the song of enlightenment.... In your heart you can hear it now, if you listen.... It is the song your spirit has been singing since the moment of your birth. All lasting victories are won in the heart.... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
YES!! I love Lorena McKennit!! I've heard others sing this too...one of my fave versions is by Sinead O'Conner!! |
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