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| Dark Poetry #1 |
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The Waiting Game |
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Passnot Junior Member
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18 |
The Waiting Game When the last drop hits the ground While the sun goes down After the flowers bloom I slowly wait in gloom As the sky comes undone During the setting sun Before seeds sprout I slowly wait it out Always the raining sky Never will the sun die In between death and life I wait for my wife |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Pass, this is excellent... great rhyme flow... and it has a gentle peaceful feel to it .. even though its so sad and moving. very good work here. take care, jm Is it too much to find an answer, Is it too much to hold you close. Is it too much to find a reason, Is it too much to free my soul -- From self control ... And I know you're always waiting for me ... You take me far away, And I know you're holding me ... And it's better now ... ~vertical horizon~ |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
As do I my friend. We will wait together. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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