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isiskate81
Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 31


0 posted 2000-04-28 12:21 PM




You come to me at night,
The few time I can sleep,
Your hair is jet black,
Your eyes are honey brown,
Your kisses are mind blowing
When where together I am happy
My heart skips beats,
Then I wake up and your gone again,
My perfect dream man,
A kiss till we meet again.

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Honeybee
Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
1 posted 2000-04-28 01:05 PM


A short and to the point poem.  Well written!
I think that every one at some point in their lives experiences this.  You have described your experience well.  Wouldn't it be nice if we could just pull our dream man out of our dreams and bring him to life, like Cinderella and her prince, happily ever after?!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  

Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-04-29 11:37 AM


Yes in dreams we meet, and are perfect.
And in reality we are also perfect.
It's in the finding that's interesting.
Yes it's short and good to the point.
Write on.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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