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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia 
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What is wrong with me? I have a heavy feeling within my heart. Where is the sun? Nothing but a gray ball Colourless and dim. Why do these tears forcefully, uncontrollably flow down my face? When will I feel harmony,laughter and peace with myself again? Who would of thought that someone like me could get the blues! 4/27/00 -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
We all get them hon, did writing the poem vent those feelings a little? It usually helps somewhat. Rent a sad tear jerking movie and have a good cry, that helps too!! Hope you are cheery again soon  A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
(((((hugzzzz))))) though the sunlight may fade and some days not seem as bright ... There may be times with no moon or stars at night ... The sun will shine brightly again in the bright blue sky Sometimes it helps to sit down and have a real good cry So don't worry my friend, don't let life get you down Put on a smile replace that frown !!! |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Who would have thought that someone like me could get the blues! I spent my life a happy boy, then reality hit me like a ton of bricks. ----------------------- Great writing. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KitKat~ Might sound strange ... but when I get the 'blues' ... I try to see just how many shades and hues there are in them. I sing 'em. I write 'em. I place them in a kaleidoscope of blue crystal hues and find that they blend and eventually carry me back to the shades of sunshine. Blue is so pretty .... and when diluted with a tear or two ... they flow into beautiful poetry from my soul. The experience doesn't happen often for me .. but, I enjoy it when it does. Enjoyed your feelings on blue. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
The bluez they come and go at all stages in our lives, i'm sorry to say won't be the first or last time you will experience them  but hey look on the bright side there is always someone to share them with and someone who understands and will help the bluez to pass, don't ever think you have to go through it alone ((HUG))Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Starrgazer/tracie - thanks for the hugs. They felt good. Marge - thanks for bringing a smile to me face. Joelthe wolf - yea reality sucks sometimes Isis - I did. Watched "Beaches" still sniffering over that one. And yes, I feel a little better today Thanks everyone |
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