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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Another sleepless night, you came slipping unto my back door, like the age old milkman with the trust of all bottles rattling my memories of your passing, I’m feeling so small. Before I knew, you had slipped into my arms, with an old familiarity of our once love feeling you snuggle up to me bear not a stitch on, but the red silken nightgown we loved to play in happy in the elation of you landing my white dove. Smelling your perfume so vividly within my senses as you lay your head on my chest with a sigh of completeness as our hearts beat as one. listening to an age old love theme dancing in unison with our spirits like some. Holding you so tight, very close to breaking your body with the strength I posses trying to blend us together in spiritual sigh. rocking an ageless tempo of passion, entwined within this spectral plane, over come with a sense of loss with a pondering question, why? As your lips rise to meet mine, my head begins to bow down to you again. I longingly try to gaze within your eyes hoping to catch the spirit of our union long ago, finding the heart does lie to the spirit, a sin. As like the pine bends to the caressing lover wind with a haunting whisper of ageless love between the two. liken my head bending down, the pine can only endure so much. until nature takes over and the snapping begins like my sobs, of lost passion and spirit does leave me on cue. Then the forest of passion on both planes drinks in the passing of a member and the final demise of both. As the great pine bows for the last time to meet it’s reflection in the river my spirit does follow to this final reflection in pain. The night still existing as you slowly mist away in my freighting futile pace of tears trying to hold my specter you. You would not simply disappear in a blink like so many visitations but taking your time in the passing, as to seep my heart undo. Like the great pine, I can only endure so many a bowing my heart does ache so, still smelling your essence upon my chest. I awake to the cold night, with all the feelings of your passing asleep an hour, and the night is young the pain is in the knowing. ------------------------------------------------------- God I miss my White Dove so. She flies still away from me. Why did I sign in as the wolf? because he does not howl for loss, But for the knowing of love. And the passing of time. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
WOW joel very heartfelt stuff i liked it |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
It's so wonderful when the ones we've loved come to us in our dreams, and so heartwrenching when we wake and reality strikes as we find ourselves alone and without them. I loved reading this. "finding the heart does lie to the spirit, a sin." and this was one of my favourite lines, so true, so painful "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time that you've never had it before." ~author unknown~ |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Very nice poem Joel! So full of heart and soul Dark_kisses I do not love you for being perfect..... I love you for being perfect for me!! |
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DarkAnjl Junior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 17 |
This was so visually graphic to me. I could feel your loneliness and it touched me deeply. Fantastic poem !!!! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Joel, I am speechless, I see and feel your confusion and pain. Here, take my hand, now and always you have a friend.. *hugs* A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Joel,...I almost don't know what to say. Beautifully written...and as far as writing anything else....I'm at a loss for words.  *You amaze me. |
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kristi Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 33Yulee, FL |
Absolutely beautiful. What else could I possibly say? |
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sKiTtLeS Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113wisconsin, u.s.a. |
Terribly impressive, Joel. Great job, very strong, and definately touching. a friend always- sKiTtLeS~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
words written from a man in love...and so beautiful. Exquisite imagery and honest, sensitive phrasing.... Joel, you ARE the biggest and the strongest and the most gentle poet!!! Kathleen |
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Lady Bere Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 73Valmeyer, Illinois USA |
I don't know that there is anything I can say that has not been said, but I felt the need to say it anyway. In the simplest terms this is beautiful. The love expressed in this poem takes my breath away. Without darkness there is no light Without the light we cannot see the dark Balance...It heals the soul -- by: LB |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Tess my friend down under, thank you and yes the heart does lie. Dark_kisses_Within, from a soul so full of heart, I thank you DarkAnjl, to touch anyone of us is truly great, and yes you are right. Isis, my .com child, haha, to render you speechless is beyond imagination, I thank you. SpitFire, again another one with loss of words, if you guys keep this up I'll stop writing, I wont be the demise of your expressing. hahaha sKiTtLeS, yes a friend in deed, to all ages we can be friends, this forum has no recognition of ages. Irish Rose, And you are way to kind, my friend, have fun on the ocean. Lady Bere, Stay your breath, I may need CPR before I'm done with my White Dove. Again Thank you all. My Heart! to you. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh joel~ I wish your white dove would land and stay forever as she is in your heart. This was filled with soulfull longing and desire I feel your pain and hope that it's over soon  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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