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michellemckee Junior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 49Tucson, AZ |
Betrayer Black clouds descending upon me Feeling lost and desperate Strike out Flailing in a sewer of uncertainty Drowning in the lies you told The pain enfolds me and I sink beneath its weight The vile truth of who you are Chokes me with rage and fills me with disgust Betrayer of children Womanizer Emotional predator Your wound your prey leaving it To die in abject horror and pain After you have hunted do you feel satisfied Do you stop hungering for the pain you cause Are you at peace with yourself How can this be so simple for you To walk away from the ones you claimed to love You betrayed my children and me Beware of me Although I am crippled now it is only temporary Leave while you still can If I recover my heart and you still remain close I will tear yours out Leaving it for the vultures and I will never look back |
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kristi Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 33Yulee, FL |
Welcome! I know your pain all to well. Great poem! Two men look through the same bars. One sees the mud, and one the stars.-? |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Wow..Welcome. THis post is just beyond words. Oh do I know this feeling right now...and the pain and suffering....it'll get better and Karma will deal out just rewards.... Daniel The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome Michelle!! I agree with Daniel, awesome post and Karma evens it all out in the end!!  A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
My vengeful wrath I'll take to thee. But to you God has beaten me. ---------------------------- Yes I agree Karma will fall. and the acts done here are unthinkable to me. my heart to you kid. I like the strength in your writing, keep it up. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WoW....very powerful and most intense. I can't understand why some men do this, so many times recently I have laid witness to this and I wonder if they stop and think what they have done and do they ever realise what they have given up. This was sad to read and I hope he gets what he deserves and to you I hope you find happiness and I'm sure you will get through this. Tracie~ P.S welcome to passions this was a wonderful way to enter, great strength. Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Wow this is powerful. I too have been there. Ten years later I sit back and watch as his life now crumbles. Sweet revenge, what comes around goes around. My day has come. Guilty as I watch with a smile upon my face. I had to do nothing, he created his own hell. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome! If this is an example you have powerful, creative energy and I'm looking forward to reading more. Kathleen indy31_99@yahoo.com |
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