Dark Poetry #1 |
Breaking me in? |
Dark Usagi Junior Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 18Oviedo, FL, USA |
Breaking me in? Is this what you call it? Thinking that once I bleed it makes other heartbreaks easier Scars cannot stop the pain you throw at me Even a fair white stalion cannot help but to dirty her strong beautiful pale fur when hit How can you expect me not to feel when you hurt me so? No matter how thick the scars when stabbed hard enough I feel bleed So I say, the only name I can see is heartbreak "Pictures are so perfect...in a perfect moment until you look into their eyes and truley see the storms of their soul"-Dark Usagi |
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Kurly Junior Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 48 |
Great Poem.. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Great work and style here DU!! A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is interesting the way you have written about hurt and pain and heatbreak and bleeding and hitting. You seems so detached from it all. It touches my emotions. James |
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