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Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2000-04-26 06:47 PM

Broken heart
  million parts
   scattered about
     silent shout

       Deaf ears
         many fears
           several lies
             love dies

                I'm confused
                   been abused
                     strong hate
                      revealed late

                      Anger reigns
                     inner pains
                   torn flesh
                 fluids mesh

             Blood flows
          in rows
         bright red
       already dead

     Soul departs
   fresh start
  new life
no strife

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Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

[This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 04-26-2000).]

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

1 posted 2000-04-27 12:55 PM

Well kid it goes from bad to good, in knowing your history,your getting out of a ?? union, so on to better things, use this as a stepping stone in life,
A greag graphic poem.
I like the design.
Joel.

I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2000-04-27 02:14 AM

Joel,

I know it is always darkest before the dawn, but there will be a dawn soon. Yes, it will be my stepping stone. No where to go but up as they say!! Thank you on the design!!

Lone Wolf

Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

3 posted 2000-04-27 09:03 AM

LW....I enjoyed the beat of this...the expression you gave in such short statements...and the poetic fashion it was posted in.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2000-04-27 07:38 PM

SF,
Thank you very much!! Did not feel happy writing it, but now I do!!

Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

5 posted 2000-04-28 05:22 AM

I really liked the way this flowed.

MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU,
MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK
MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE
THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS
AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN,
MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND

Irish Blessing

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

6 posted 2000-04-28 07:11 AM

This is great lone one, I like the way it flows and the way it presents on screan

Tracie~

Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

hsystems
Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 319
Murray, UT, USA

7 posted 2000-04-28 10:44 AM

Lone Wolf - very well-put, my friend! As one who, as you know, has "been there, done that," I can only promise you that it does get better! {{{HUGS}}}

Troy

Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry
http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm

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