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Dark Poetry #1

Lasting a lifetime....

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-04-27 02:31 AM

however brief the moment
it can last a lifetime
if you only let it shine
in hope..i can dream
and pretend everythings mine
skip stones in the water
forget who i am..and get lost
in the tides of time..
with the silence of many
their beacon..their burden
leaving me
to immerse myself in plenty..of pity

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

1 posted 2000-04-27 08:39 AM

Yes like a skipping stone we can return to our pitty
one great way to express this.
Joel.

I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

kristi
Junior Member

since 2000-04-24

Posts 33
Yulee, FL

2 posted 2000-04-27 10:46 AM

Great poem! Keep it up!

dhuron
Member

since 2000-03-19

Posts 476

3 posted 2000-04-27 09:22 PM

"leaving me
to immerse myself in plenty..of pity"

Hmm...now that I think says it all. Been there too many times...and it is a very hard to to escape.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2000-04-27 09:24 PM

a unique poem, very meaningful!

Kathleen

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