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amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

0 posted 2000-04-25 11:05 AM



Dear,
I can never feel the feelings that I don't have for you
so if you care to listen here they are,

I cannot hate you for a sigle moment of my life
I cannot feel any indifference towards you
I cannot act as though we're not mean't to be together
I cannot pretend the anger or resentment of any kind as I don't have any of them
I cannot avoid seeing your eyes
I cannot abstain from holding your hands
I cannot avoid loving you, with the same delight we had when our eyes met
there were times when everything seemed to be lost and gone
but it was definitely harder on me than you can think
I tried my best to face things stoically
honestly,I never felt lost at anytime time when...
As I can never stop loving you
I love you and I've felt loved always
in the end,it's all that matters

we're two souls entwined,growing freely in love
there needn't be anyhting more than that
so stay calm in moments of storm
be bold in momets of cold
don't let fear come near
clarify with me at times when mutual trust is questioned

I love you dear


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Kurly
Junior Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 48

1 posted 2000-04-25 02:03 PM


good poem! though i would recamend you shorten them alittle.
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2000-04-25 06:05 PM


"clarify with me at times when mutual trust is questioned"  "I love you dear".  I loved reading this...it really touched my heart....it is soft and lovely.   James
AVANTI
Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
3 posted 2000-04-26 02:00 AM


This one touched me...
this was very true and honest from the heart
lovely poem

 If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-04-26 07:22 PM


Beautiful words of love from the heart, nothing finer!!  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

5 posted 2000-04-27 09:35 PM


a true, love letter

 Kathleen


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