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ashen
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since 2000-04-25
Posts 13


0 posted 2000-04-26 05:14 AM



-Dwelling-

I do what I do because I want,
You do what you do because you can,
If things were changed in some way
My only regret would be losing you.

I see time as something seperate,
You taste life on your lips,
If shattered dreams are so hurtful
My only regret would be saving you.

When I collapse inside
And the lights fade out
Will I miss you again?
Can I grieve death twice?

Can I limit my sensitivity?,
Why is it so push and shove?,
If shattered dreams are memories
Can you console me from above?

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Tess
Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288
Australia
1 posted 2000-04-26 11:45 AM


"Can you console me from above?"
would be nice wouldnt it?   to be able to still have that contact

 "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time
that you've never had it before."
~author unknown~



Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
2 posted 2000-04-26 02:33 PM


I agree with Tess.. it would be nice.  Very deep poem, I enjoyed greatly.

Peace
Dark_kisses


 I do not love you for being perfect.....
I love you for being perfect for me!!


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-04-26 10:04 PM


I don't think you can limit one's sensitivity.
It is there regardless, to hide it, cover it, shelter it, defeats the purpose in the long run anyways.  We live and learn and sometimes suffer pain to learn something important.]
Even though they have passed on, they are alive in memory and in our heart, it is the loving that makes our lives, and that never stops even with death...
Wonderful work here hon  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
4 posted 2000-04-27 01:23 AM


Contact with the departed? I've seen the walking dead. like my X.
But no cantact yet.
Love your work.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

5 posted 2000-04-27 08:52 PM


Wonderful.  It would be nice if we can limit everything, not feel as much hurt. But we can't, we must endure and keep hope.
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