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Final Curtain |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
The darkness of the final curtain is now frighteningly certain there will be no escape from the things that have taken shape Time to forgive the past free from the chains at last break through this mold finally try to get a hold Where I will go from here always stay very near those that I cherish I will not allow myself to perish Have to be strong the ordeal has been long weary from the fight the end is in sight A divorce is in the wings new found freedom rings a chance to live for me can be so much more I see ------------------------------------------------------- Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
When one door closes another opens.. All we can be is the best we can be.. Find your strength, find your purpose hon Great work  A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Isis....Thank you very much for the words of encouragement. I know there is another door opening very soon. I have done my best here, but that wasn't good enough so onward I go. I have found more strength than I ever thought I had and yes, a purpose too. Amazing what one can accomplish when faced with the reality of it. Perhaps we should talk sometime?? Let me know.... Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Yes kid you have the strength. It shows in your post, like this one. Take care. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Joel, Yes, I do have the strength to go on. Was there all along I think....just had to find it. Glad you like this one!! Taking care, as always!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Freedom is one everyone should wish for in life Free to breathe Free to think Free to move Free to love Free to grow No more thoughts of perishing. After all ,you've just one life to live for. Dark curtains are some sorta mind block that you can overcome at anytime . Just throw away these negative thoughts. Just feel free like you're afloat just the wind as your companion. You've a great life. Just you've to see..see...see. Just take my words for today and start practising it. Sincerely A_L [This message has been edited by amazon_lover (edited 04-27-2000).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent writing...yes it is always best to take a position of strength...that doesn't mean it won't be hard, or that there will not be times to cry...but overall you must take control of your destiny and do what is right for you and the new life that is already yours. James |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
A_L, Thank you for the advice and I will take it to heart. Today I will practice it. I know the curtain is temporary and I will overcome it. James, Thank you. I try to be strong, but there are times when I cry and yes, it is hard at times. I am in control of my destiny and know I can do anything. A new life is mine to mold... Thanks for the kind words!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Your final curtain will be the time for your encore my friend! This was a work with great strength pouring through it which I have no doubt that you will find once again as you continue on the path that you are on.....the path that leads back to "you". Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Lone Wolf - this is another gem, my friend! Divorce sucks big-time...but along with being a bitter end to one segment of our lives, it can be a positive beginning to another one. So glad you have realized this! {{{HUGS}}}  Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Divorce is always hard. Glad to see you are moving onward. Best wishes for a happy journey. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Butterflies... Thank you, my friend. I hope it is!!! Yes, the road to "me" is one that hasn't been visited in years. Gla dto have the strength to go back though. Troy... Wow...A gem!!! Thank you!!! It does suck, but I know in my heart it is for the best. There are bigger and better things awaiting me. I'm glad too, my friend!! {{{{HUGS}}}} to you, as always!! Lone Wolf Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Kitkat, Yes, it is. Thank you for the well wishes!! Much appreciated!!!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Wishing you the best of luck Divorce seems to be looming on my horizon too, but I also see the endless possibilities of freedom and hope and a new start and you expressed that so well in your poem... Mystical being which makes ink flow Surround me in your incandescent glow Fill my brain with thoughts and rhyme As I try to capture but a moment in time ~Shan~ |
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