Dark Poetry #1 |
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Once Again |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida ![]() |
I knew it was too good to be true. People never come through as they should. I can't even tell if the truth is Still in your eyes. Used to be my last resort, Stumbling through your maze of lies. My heart is thumping, Emptiness echoing through my chest, Or is it pain, My uninvited, frequent guest? My mind is racing, Constantly berating me- "Never should have listened!!! How could you believe what he professed? Time always tells, track history always fails the biggest test!!" So this is what I get for giving in, Once again. Angry, sad and confused, Beaten, bleeding and bruised. For what would seem the rest of my life. Can't help but blame myself, I'm the one who let him in, Once again. *****kynder The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
It seems our brains go south and our hearts cry out unheard. When we let them back into our lives. Will the lesson never be learned. this is a very well written poem, it stayed with the subject, and had a heartfelt dance to it. in one word, " Great " Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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kristi Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 33Yulee, FL |
Great job! "can't help but blame myself, I'm the one who let him in" , no way girl! It's always HIS fault!! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~You let him in,....now show him the way out. Please,...for yourself..for everything you have to give to others who care and love...and for all the learning and experiencing you have to do. Do it for you...for your growth in this world. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
i really appreciate your replies and thoughtful words!!! thank our good Lord, i have escaped the trap i had set for myself. read my post My Day at the Beach!!!!! hahahah love you all more than you will ever know. love, kynder Psalm 27 |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Kynder Be sure when ever you get into some relationship. It takes time to develop confidence and if the other person is just foolin around just chuck him out as he doesn't deseve you. Sincerely A_L |
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