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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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Someone I thought wanted to know me died today. An attempt too late a life grown old alone never knowing me never trying hard enough not in my life never knew what I liked how my voice sounds now that I am older how my smile looks when I feel good hadn't seen a tear of mine most of which he created in a far away place he knows it's too late to begin again something that should of happened when he said it would years ago I waited,...eager to learn eager to live to try it an ending so bitter, so cold empty and stale I've thought a lot about this happening I knew it would knew you'd gone too far I gave you a chance to redeem yourself and all the pain you caused watch me from where you are now see what I'm like see what I've become on my own in this world in a harsh place to grow I've survived you I've survived my own darkness look at me from where you are smile for me because.... I made it... I'm making it everyday. I wrote this a while ago...it didn't actually take place today. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
 See? I'm smiling anyways for you, for making it this far! Whether it was a while ago, or yesterday you deserve the triumphant smile, to overcome such sadness and pain is indeed an achievement hon, I know... Great work  A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Sometimes we forsee our own futures, I may write something down now then post it much later when I think it's right. Well this is right for you know kid. You are doing OK. and your expressing your self well. Thanks for a small window into your world. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Thanks for peeking  and thanks for your smile Isis...I felt it!!! |
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Kurly Junior Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 48 |
Great Poem!! I'm glad you made it, keep on writing I enjoy your works. |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi You're not what you've become,what you're going to be,what you were. You're what you feel,think,dream,desire etc. A man/woman has lost essence of good aspects when darkness surrounds or you're loomed by some ghosts which taunted you. You should be happy now because that ghost is no more near you. Just don't give a damn to him or his thoughts. Stay positive and I'm sure you have a bright life ahead of you. Don't care about this moron. Stay open and you'll find your love someday. Have a very very good day and life. Sincerely A_L |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Thank you, thank you for your kind words of encouragement. Your reply has already made me feel strength...you speak with such a sense of belief in what you say. I'll take it, think of it often, and use it...try to live it. Thanks |
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