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Thinking It Through |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida 
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I thought if I listened to him, I would also be heard. I thought if I was there for him, I would prove myself loyal. I thought if i shared my heart, He wouldn't punch through yet Another gaping hole. Shows what I know, Standing here with my Swiss cheese soul. *****kynder The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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kittyj Junior Member
since 2000-04-17
Posts 32CANADA |
Why are the rules always different for them? Things we agree on being unspeakably horrible, suddenly are being done to us by the same person who at one time would have spit on that type of behaviour. It is craziness! It is unfair, and horrible, and they will do it again and again, while we sit and try to make some sense of it. I will stand there with ya girl. This poem cuts right through, leaving no questions. Good work sweetie. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
kynder your on a roll. Good to have you back again. this is in with your last post? the same subject? any way this is a very good post also. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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kristi Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 33Yulee, FL |
I really liked it. It really hit home. |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
well this was short but hitting...definately If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Very nice ...i liked it  |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Kynder Oh this is way to close to my feelings right now. I thought If I was there, always there giving myself to help. But no, I too was wrong and am left while the ruins of my heart and soul. Wonderful Job, you've expressed it so very well... Damn Life is painful, but have hope for that is the only thing that lasts... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
you really know how to relate don't you!!! I've felt this way, you give and give, and you feel wounded.... very good piece, very honest Kathleen |
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Lady Bere Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 73Valmeyer, Illinois USA |
Great poem! It does hit home for me as well. Thank you for the poetic expression of my emotional state. Without darkness there is no light Without the light we cannot see the dark Balance...It heals the soul -- by: LB |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
wow, it amazes me that so few words can explain so many hearts. such a shame isn't it? all these loving people here, you would think there were more of us out there... shows what i know!! lol making it anyway kynder Psalm 27 The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Kynder~ What a gem of a poem Loved it.Shows what I know.... Standing here with my swiss chees soul Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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