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Dark Poetry #1

Let Me Learn...

Desire
New Member

since 2000-04-21

Posts 2
California, USA

0 posted 2000-04-27 12:43 PM

Thank you Daddy,
For your knowledge and experience,
For your old ways,
For not letting me learn on my own.

Thank you Daddy,
For your words of encouragement,
For continuously bringing to my attention that I could do better,
For not paying attention to my feelings.

Thank you Daddy,
For taking me in when I needed shelter,
For putting up with me,
For not letting me forget who's roof I was under.

Thank you Daddy,
But when you're not around...
Who will scold me like a child?
Who will point me in the right direction?
Who will be there?
Let me live...
Let me grow...
Let me fail...
Let me learn.

[This message has been edited by Desire (edited 04-28-2000).]

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

1 posted 2000-04-28 09:18 AM

I guess with all Daddy (icons) we never do better.
Well kid you did ok here.
A great expression, from your heart,
keep writing.
you are living.
You are growing.
You only fail, if you quit, stepping stone of the heart.
That's in the learning.
Joel.

I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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