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xEmperorEmber
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 136
tx

0 posted 2000-04-25 04:44 AM


Seperate myself from the day
Its so unreal
I live at night
Love so thick it can kill

Unwind and step down
Peace on a blown mind
My head plays your voice
My soul left blind

Stumble into you
Slip into a thought
Now is my best forever
Wrap myself in knots

I starve for Motive
I want your power
This makes no sense
My soul you devour

Horrible Man at peace
Dead man Walking
Slowly fading
Your last essence im stalking

Rage for my confusion
The last words i speak
I am waiting
My penalty steep

Glorify my last breath
feed my evil with the power of the sun
Now i am just like them
Mom i own a gun

Color me different with love
Scribble on my face
Shimmer and fade
Put me back in my place

After all I gained
I wanted it all for something else
I gave it all up
Shhh..... dont tell

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Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-04-25 08:54 AM


Verrry haunting my friend,
I hope this is just a good poem to you, it is to me, but again I hope this is just a good poem.  When you bring mom into it?? well I know of men that have screemed out their mother's name in battle. Is this a battle for you kid?
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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