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Lost In Life |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA 
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Standing in a room Full of people You feel hoplessly alone And lost Knowone cares Knowone understands At least not the way you want You take the long walk everywhere To get away Cause you can't be near them You just can't hadle it It like you hear there little thoughts Of there sad version of life Even though I loved to have that easy life I could be underestimating your life But I pretty sure isn't like this I am pretty sure you can't servive But sometimes I am pretty sure life isn't exactly worth it untill you make it That is just me! -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
A great poem, well this is a first somehow it repeated it's self. hell. So I changed the text in this one. hahaha Joel.< !signature--> I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. [This message has been edited by Joel the wolf (edited 04-24-2000).] |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
A great poem, I have been standing in this very same room, and felt the very same feelings. not many understand. Not there, more so here. Joel.. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
Long time no post huh? Great to have ya back! I like I like! I know this feeling or at least one like it...you put it into words so well! "Sheltered from the world you scare yourself from the rain...away from the dark sickning fog that so stumblest unto your heart...for no true poet holds loves hand..."-TanAngel |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Well written poem A lonely and sad piece  A  and Hug is sent your wayTracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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