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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
The rain continues to fall There are footsteps in the hall Outside my door A shadow cast on the floor I thought I heard your voice Giving me a choice On what happens next Rewrite the text Don't have to be sad Feel so very bad About things we've said The love that is dead Nothing as it seems Noises just a dream I am here alone Heart heavy as stone The truth will come out I have no doubt Everyone will see It wasn't me You wanted this Things were amiss A long time ago This I do know Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
My furry friend, and creature of the night. You have said all this with your heart, I hope it is the stepping stone to a new start. Finding your way around the chambers of your heart, can be painful. But know you have friends here, and a friend in me. This will be felt on the echoes of a long howl. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I am listening my furry friend. Yes, my heart went into this...all of it. I do believe it is the stepping stone to a new start in my life. The time is here to move forward and not look back. It is painful, but I know I have many friends to help me through. Thank you for offering your friendship....I accept. I think I could learn a lot from you. We must talk sometime. I hear that howl long and clear, my wolf brother. Thank You, Lone Wolf< !signature--> Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 04-23-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hey there,...great post. I felt my heart being tugged at and ripped while reading. Really,...this poem touched home. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
SpitFire....hey back!! Thank you for the kind words. Sorry you can relate so well to it. My heart has already been ripped too. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest |
You have given us a very good look into the heart of one who has done all they know to do, but things are out of their control?? Thank you for the read......once again this place amazes me, with the people whom I see having the same feelings. I apprieciate the gifts I see in my fellow poets, more and more all the time. |
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