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amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

0 posted 2000-04-24 03:35 PM



Speaking with you everytime
gives a passion which can last a lifetime
from the time I saw you I believed that you're the one I can share my life with
well,share all of me, my happiness, my dreams , my fears, my tears
I'd like to hold your hands
feel your pulse everytime
as the blood surges with passion
kiss your soft lips and feel it all over me
I can't think of a moment without you in it
if you think it's impossible, I reveal that
I hold a pillow close to my heart and whisper
songs of love and vent out all feelings to it
I'm not sure of the course our love will take
but I'm sure our feelings are not fake
if your question is ,can we survive in the  real world
the answer is, we are for eachother and nothing else matters
its a very long way for us
just carry on my love with your routine
we're doing fine as we'll do always
Just remember you've every right to doubt ME
But when you're confronted just clear it with ME
I'll never lie,it's the way I wish from YOU too
we've had everything and nothing
still,we're doing fine and that only matters
just remember whenever there is some situation
which questions mutual trust
please,just get it cleared
there is nothing to be feared
I love you more than you can comprehend
I know that you'll love me to the very end
I hope I can meet your expectations of guy
as I'm sure you have met mine
today,my life has taken a beautiful turn
I send my kisses to your soft red-lips
I wish I could feel it sometime soon


Lov
amazon_lover


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Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-04-24 03:56 PM


This reads like the hundreds of letters to my white dove, very heart felt,
You have a very large heart, I hope the other can match it.
You have layed yourself on the line in the writing, and exposed your heart, spirit, and soul.
Take care my friend.
this is a great read.
thank you.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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