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Earth Spirit |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
The gentle breeze in the sky, faint smell of the water, the Warmth of the Eternal Sun pouring down on the Lush Green grass, birds chirping their love song Watching the Leaves in the Blue Sky Lying in the Soft Lush Grass Hearing the faint song of the water Relaxing under the sun, on mother earth The Wind picks up, Water goes Mute Clouds overtake the enchanting sky I feel the ground tremble, the fear is almost overwhelming to my senses A faint voice crying out A beautiful woman, the most lovely these eyes have laid eyes upon, the depths of the ocean within her eyes, her voice as sweet as the wind, her hair seemed to be fire and beautiful skin, fare and untouched like this portion of earth Allured by her Majestic Beauty, moving closer while extending my Hand Time slows to a complete stop. Light, Blinding Light Coming from Her Swept Away to another Place, Unfamiliar but immaculate. There She Stands, the Spirit of the Land. Mother Earth Silent She remains, but the Pain radiates from those eyes Fire slowly rising all around my body, but I have no fear of being burned or harmed, closer the burning fire comes to me. Feeling The Heat, Not fearing, Knowing this Fire of Love will not Harm Me. Feeling the Fire on my skin, feeling the warmth from this loving flame. Closing My eyes, feeling Her emotions through this fire, slowly understanding Cooling wind blows over my body, Looking around to find myself among the clouds Riding the Currents, Soaring through the sky just like the daydream, feeling complete Freedom as the wind dances around me, and passing through clouds like a fantasy Almost touching the sun, watching it recede into the Depths. Emerging the Moon Feeling the wind Hold me like a Lost love. Losing all senses and enveloped Slowly pushing me into the Welcoming Blue Waters...not wanting to let me go Slowly sinking into the water, feeling the wind upon my fingertips... Holding Breathe under the water, slowly sinking downward Hearing the singing of the dolphins, just as in my dream Seeing The Light at the center of the Ocean Everything just as the Dream, moving closer Mysteriously all doubts and confusion leave Taken over by a strange desire, Swimming faster Feeling the water’s warmth, remembering the fire Feeling a faint breeze, remembering the wind Looking at the ocean floor, remembering earth Seeing The spirit in the Center of the radiating Light Reaching Out for her....Reaching for her hand....... Back in the unfamiliar place, seeing the four elements before me Seeing her in front of me, the single tear gone. Knowing she completed her task. Hearing Her Faint voice in my mind, showing me the dreams once again Telling me the reason for the dreams by showing me the truth We have forgotten the true splendor of Nature, to busy to admire what is given to us freely....swept away once again Waking up, back under the sun at the lake. Everything as it was, Lying back looking out at Nature and Seeing the Spirit in the Sky Knowing and Finally, Finally Seeing. The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
This was beautiful! Excellent work!! Peace, Dark_kisses I do not love you for being perfect..... I love you for being perfect for me!! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
d~ You have such a way with words, you sweep my spirit away with you everytime I read something like this from you. Thanks for the ride~  Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
The feeling just washes over you when you "finally" do see. lovely poem. Michael |
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Kurly Junior Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 48 |
Awesome poem! i wish I could write that good. |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
My heart stopped while I was reading this... wow...it was so powerful and gracefully written all the same! Beautiful work...hope to see more... "Sheltered from the world you scare yourself from the rain...away from the dark sickning fog that so stumblest unto your heart...for no true poet holds loves hand..."-TanAngel |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I'm with Tan Angel on this one, Isis Goddess and Mother of all was moved, A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
This took me for a better ride than most. Thank you. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
you have domne a great job with this ... beautiful... it took a while reading it but was worth it!!! very well expressed... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
OK, ok..I'm simply echoing the comments above..but still a haunting poem about the beauty of nature..sensaul and intimate and peaceful....left a lingering feeling of oneness "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time that you've never had it before." ~author unknown~ |
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