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SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396


0 posted 2000-04-24 03:00 PM


                     ~Express~

                 A single yellow bud
                dancing in the breeze
                    in the night
                    in the hour
               of your dissapointment
                 trying desperately
                      to open
                     to flower
                     to release
                     to express
                         it
                         s
                          e
                           l
                            f
                             .
                              .
                               .


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Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-04-24 03:49 PM


And you have done well in the expressing
little flower,
in this breeze,
in this night,
in this hour,
never have dissapointed,
have opened, without desperation,
this flower,
this release,
this expression,
in yourself.
Thank you for opening.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-04-24 04:09 PM


~Joel,Joel,Joel....you always know what to say.  You make me feel better than you'll ever know.  You're kind words put smiles on my face...thank you for that.  
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