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The Breeze of Jasmine.
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The Breeze of Jasmine. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
The Breeze of Jasmine I guess with all that is about, a true love is without a doubt, the most elusive thing we seek. Finding the search exhausting one that leaves us week. Our hearts pour out to the world asking why it is so wrong. Why is it this way? Why is there no heart song? We seek to find a whispering word from all our friends. Something to hold onto in this world, with it’s twist and bends. But like the breeze blowing through a jasmine bush. Running head long into our senses the essence we lush. The fragrance is beyond compare, it brings us tidings of love in the air. We reach out to catch it but in it’s nature, it’s leaves us in anguished despair. Passing us buy a transitory thought it can endure only what it may be! Remember it in the passing is our eternity. What it is not. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Awesome Guy New Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 9Qualicum Beach , BC, Canada |
the elusivity of long-lasting love frustrates us as the scent of a flower lasts a mere instant as we pass by, or as we imagine butterfly-wing-dust settling upon our eyelids as we dream of our passions. Nice words to think about. Thanks |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Joel, I love reading this one. I am wordless on how to describe it. I really like this one, I'm sending it to a friend. Daniel The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
WoW...this was great Joel. Truly a great piece.  Yours truly, Angel "A man's fate is a man's fate and life is but an illusion." -Shogun ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Nice work....this poem left me pondering thoughts related...I enjoyed it....I think it's great. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this was refreshing, beautiful, thoughtful. Well, I just loved it! Kathleen |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Joel~ Loved this poem of yours....Thats the thing about our senses, once we have experienced the smell, taste and touch of something we never forget it. So the same with love, it may leave us but is never forgotten because those senses never forget. Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Awesome Guy, thank you from a poet like you, this is a kind word. Daniel, Did your friend like it? Angel, thanks truly. Spit, I guess splitting your name isn't so good? "pondering thoughts related?" This is what we try to do is it not? I. R. AKA (cookie). haha thank you I guess it was one of my better days. hahaha Tracie66, thank you for your never ending wisdom. Thanks again I want you all to know it means a lot to me when you reply. even if it's a hi. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Yes Joel, My friend loved it. A favorite of his now. Thanks for sharing it Daniel |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
This one needed several reads..and I like that in a poem...gets the mind and imagination working! "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time that you've never had it before." ~author unknown~ |
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