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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
~~~ Oke, this isn't one of my best but it cured my writer's block! I wrote is last night when I had one of my little emotional trips. So if it doesn't make sense you know why. Well, I hope you like it. ~~~ Fumbling and falling towards the floor Searching for some sense of stability, as the room spins and quakes Pounding in my head, a throbbing I can't ignore I choke on my tears as I search for something to bring me back to myself Even though, I know not of who that is or even the presence which has taken over me I'd pray that this would be the end, I'd become lost in my own darkness and crazy eyes for the very last time But I know it'll happen again, like a vampire coming again to suck my life away, and when all that is left is barely enough, he leaves me again And I lay here on the floor in a blank stare, no longer crying, no longer breathing, just frozen and broken Listening to my heart whisper, "Somebody help me please....please..." "A man's fate is a man's fate and life is but an illusion." -Shogun ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
OMG...I've felt that too often. Like when the noise of the world around you seems to dissapear and you're in your own little world in your head....falling as you mentioned in your opening line. Great piece...I loved it. |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
GREAT! DE, this is really awsome. Glad you are cured of that pesky writers block. Daniel The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
This is great indeed, Writers block?? what's that?? haha. yea I know. I hope this isn't you on the floor, if it is get up and take a hot shower, feel the skin burn and know your alive. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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DarkAnjl Junior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 17 |
Sis as always your words move me. I know what it feels like and I am moved by the feelings your poem gave me. Please keep me posted on your new listings. |
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