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What the hell am I?
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What the hell am I? |
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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
And I am saying...how can it be..when it never was.. I suppose I lost in the deck.. when mixing with the crowd I've had too many turns...yet still I see.. when I give up...rather you than me... Hate to feel.. yet feel I still do.. and when it becomes of love..oh, what should I do.. I guess it's the price I pay.. for being me.. but..I can still weep..for that which I see.. I'm locked within this form... but still I cry.. and I say...hey now..what's to be.. the only answer I get...is 'why is it me?" but I laugh out loud..and hide my pain.. without the sorrow I feel.. who would care for me.. I am lost in a crowd... and feel lonesome alone.. so yet I scream.. yet it is I, I spurn.. And whatever does come..I still can see.. in the end.. whatever I harm... still is me... Edwrad A Beerman |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
What do I see? When I look into your words and therefore you... I see a sensitive, smart man, whose happiness is just around the corner. Stay in focus hon, it will find you!!  Wonderful work of emotional meanderings... There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And I am saying...how can it be..when it never was.. I suppose I lost in the deck.. when mixing with the crowd I've had too many turns...yet still I see.. when I give up...rather you than me... Hate to feel.. yet feel I still do.. and when it becomes of love..oh, what should I do.. I guess it's the price I pay.. for being me.. but..I can still weep..for that which I see.. I'm locked within this form... -------------------- And whatever does come..I still can see.. in the end.. whatever I harm... still is me... ----------------- WOW Edward this is powerful writing.... I took a couple days off from "the Dark" but, Im glad I didnt miss this... very well written and expressed...depth of soul searching...very good, take care jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
Thank you both, Isis, This is me focused...knowing myself, Janet, Thanks for the continuing support of the thing I call art, though depressing it may be |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
My friend you are in this crowd and you shine. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
be yourself...it's the hardest thing to do sometimes...but your poem speaks of you just hanging in there... way to go! If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sorry For Never, you seem to be wrong on your self analysis, and everyone agrees so there!! A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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DarkAnjl Junior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 17 |
What a wonderful look into yourself . Very touching and a great read. Thank you for sharing with us. |
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